Thursday, February 10, 2011

CARNAL


Sitting atop the flighty stairs
Hands soothing ends of your hair
You declare the eternal love
Mind wants the lovemaking fare

Pink walls of your room glare
Love buzz makes us dare
Time to tame the soul's thirst
Hands down or heads up

Lost in the lucent eyes
I'm caught in your spell
All the scars are healed
When your lips tread a mind sealed

The fall is young tonight
We rise feeling the lusty vibe
Close your eyes with a kiss
Dreams were never this slick

Plans are made all iffy
Promises weren't so shaky
Tell me your secret
Minds lie but hearts see

Don't you worry my love
Won't leave you untended shrub
Will take the walk together
Cliched but happily ever after

5 comments:

  1. i lyk d fact dat u dn segreg8 lust frm luv.........
    actualy til v dn liv d lust part love wd never b widin reach........

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  2. n yes its a well written composition...
    i luvd it.

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  3. Thx saumya..i appreciate your insight..:-)

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  4. yar...i must say..uh r very creative kind of person...and ur poem above is really showing dat how to portray love and how to express your feelings for sm1...i really appreciate your efforts...good going..keep it up !!!

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  5. this one is really mind boggling.. good work..

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